Well everyone, I rewrote my original pitch to the story and posted it on a literary agency's blog. Now I'm just waiting to see if I'm one of the lucky ones that will get their's critiqued! Below is what I posted. If the post is chosen to be critiqued, then I'll post their response here as well.
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Kyle Johnston's world is thrown into a tailspin when his 7 year old daughter is kidnapped and killed. In the year since, the culprit has yet to be caught and as Kyle and his wife Elena try to pick up the pieces they are tormented when a letter shows up from the killer bragging about the act. Every facet of their lives appears to be an open book to this unknown tormentor. As the police continue to search for a suspect, mysterious happenings begin to make them wonder if Kyle is involved in his daughter's death as well as others. When and if Kyle finally comes face to face with the killer will he be able handle the startling revelations that come his way?
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Feel free to post your thoughts on this pitch. Does it make you want to run out and buy the book? Do you love it, hate it or have no feelings either way? Comment away!
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